Foot stuck in a grate
He became thoroughly irate
She in her flabbergasted state
Stormed out the gate
Coming back too late
He’d succumbed to his fate
The cat had taken the bait
Her mates tail never again straight

© 2017 Michelle Cook

For a month full of writing prompts click here! – Flabbergasted


13 thoughts on “Flabbergasted

    1. Lol… No… It was the mouse 🐭 who got hurt! My daughter Brianna got it wrong too. She thought it was a metaphor for a couple having a fight. Man I screwed this one up! I think a rewrite is in order. Especially since both of you didn’t get it. Lol… 😂 Back to the drawing board…. 😩🤔😳

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