She heard him stumble in
Smelling of smoke and cheap wine
It was half past two
And he had crossed the line
She’d been sound asleep
In such peaceful repose
Then he staggered in
And began licking her toes
She tried to be nice
Even gave him a quick wink
But she was tired of his shenanigans
Whenever he would drink
So she rolled right over
And ignored his advances
He needed to learn
There were only so many chances
© 2018 Michelle Cook
*This is Petunia’s side of the story, you can find Peter’s here.
Love the different narratives of these 2 characters!
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Thanks John, I always love writing stories or poems from different perspectives. I try to challenge myself with fun little pieces like this sometimes when I’m in the mood for something different. I was in a whimsical mood yesterday and I was sort of laughing as I wrote them.
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Don’t you just love that? The emotional thrill that you connect with as it comes out in your story’s content? What a rush, indeed!
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Yeah, I really do. I love playing with words, and creating characters is so much fun.
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Keep up your delightful prose and those wonderful prompts!
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Thanks John, I most certainly will. 😉
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I saw the first part and I didn’t quite understand. Now I saw this and it makes more sense. Peter better get some help…
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Fortunately Peter is fictional. Lol… 😋
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Yup. X)
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I really like this one
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Thanks! 🙂
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Tsk tsk, Peter…he should know better!
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Lol… well, he’s likely young and immature. He hasn’t learned the proper etiquette for treating a lady. Lmao… 😂
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The least he could have done was bring home something for her to drink lol
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I know… right?? Lol… 😉
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Well, if he’s drunk and smelling like tobacco, I don’t blame her. Peter’s got some issues.
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Yeah, I can’t imagine that to be a very good combination. Lol…. I’m so glad Peter and Petunia are just fictional characters in this case. 😉
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