He was a lover of words
Drifting through time
And I tried unsuccessfully
To make him mine
He was a hoper, a dreamer
Very much like me
And when we were together
He was all I could see
He had a very unique way
Of making me feel
As if the world was all mine
Ready to steal
He was impulsive and sexy
Witty and fun
And his charming personality
Could not be outdone
He was so many things
I felt that I needed
But I soon lost my way
And I never succeeded
© 2020 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/manipulation-book-relax-forest-4103289/
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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This one too! 🙂
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Yes, really happy to share this with followers, Dear M!! Reread this and loved it again! Masterfully penned!
xoxo 🌹💖😊
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Beautiful and sad
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Thank you….
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Strings been strum
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Yup, many moons ago…
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I wanted to say, as per your last response: I always put it all out there.
People don’t know if you’ve fictionalized something or not, it’s the writer;s prerogative and it will always get your work more attention.
My short stories in Fiction always got praise. Everyone thought I was making things up when I was really just writing about myself in the third person.
My professor asked me once, what was the difference between fact and fiction. I was stumped at first, even though she told me I already knew. There is little difference between fact and fiction when it comes to writing, as long as you maintain emotional truth.
You write very well, but if you put it all out there, you have the potential to be a better writer, not that you’re not, I’m just sayin’. Write until it hurts, literally.
❤
Okay I'll shut up now. Sorry.
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Thanks Charles, this is great advice, and I used to put it all out there on an anonymous blog. Unfortunately, I haven’t the time to devote to three blogs anymore. Two is sometimes hard enough. But I loved my anonymous blog because I never held anything back. Perhaps one day, I’ll start again. 🙂
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I hope that you do & thank you for the likes on my so-called poems, but what I would really like is your opinion on my short stores. 🙂
https://knittingclouds.wordpress.com/
I’m glad we spoke. I rarely speak to anyone here. I simply like hiding in plain sight.
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Oh, I’ll definitely have a look, thanks for telling me. I enabled your notifications, so I’ll actually see the things you post now. For some reason, I can never find you in the reader. I don’t speak to a lot of people on here either. But it’s nice when someone decides they want to connect with me. I think the best kinds of people are always hiding in plain sight. 🙂
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Pure awesomeness 🙂
And sad….
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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You’re very welcome!
Who knew army folk had such a way with words… 🤪
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Army folk… 😂 What do you think we normally do? Lol…
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Obey orders 😝
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Oh gosh, even back then I wasn’t good at that! 😋
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It’s a female thing 😁
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Oh really? 🙄 Lol…
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Well, yeah! (Just joking – haha)
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😲😳🤭
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I know I’m a pain in the butt.
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😬🤐
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You can say it.
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Lol…
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Ok I’ll shut now. Have a great day lol!
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You too! 🙂
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