The town of Milmonyville
Was such a curious place
Lined with quaint shops
Filled with wares of fine taste
It was like stepping back in time
As you walked down the street
And men would tip their hats
To every woman that they’d greet
Most thought it rather odd
That the people were so welcoming
And many would never go back
Because they found it so unsettling
It was almost as if the town
Was too perfect in some regards
Everything was polished and sparkling
Something you couldn’t disregard
And that old town of Milmonyville
Is still a mystery even today
Especially after heaps of bodies
Were found floating in their pristine bay
© 2018 Michelle Cook
Writing prompt: The mystery of Milmonyville
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Lol… sort of.. 😉
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Like I am Sorta doing the pronpts too
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Ewwwww!!! One helluva wonderful ending! ☺❤
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Thanks! 😉
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You’re very welcome! It was nice to see you terminating people again, lol! ☺❤
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Lol… it felt good to do it! 😁
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I love it when your darkness starts writing. ☺
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Guess I need to do more. 😉
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Oh, no. I was not prepared for that!
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Lol… I suppose I was in sort of a murderous mood today. 😉
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Very spooky! Vampires perhaps?
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Could be… Lol…I am sort of sucker for a good vampire novel. Maybe I need to write own. 😉
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Did not see this coming. Great ending, packed a punch.
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Thanks John! I always have so much fun writing stuff like this. I need to do it more often. 😉
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I look forward to it!
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🙂
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LOL. we did it again! Uncanny how this happens. Mine could be the follow up to yours. Too funny!!
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Most definitely! Lol… I had a feeling you’d do something like this. 😉
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It was the only way to go lol Besides, it’s right up my alley. I’d write about the dead, and ghosts and spirits, and evil doings all day, if I could LOLOLOL
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Well, you may have your chance soon! I’m thinking of making October a Halloween themed month. Lol…
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Oh boy….my birthday month…aging has an edge to thinking about the afterlife 😉
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Oh, yes!
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Lol… 😉
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That last part surprised me O.O I thought it was a happy poem…
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Lol… It’s always fun to add a good twist. 😉
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Haha, it is isn’t it?
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I fell for the trap too.
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Then my twist was a success! Lol… 😉
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Yeah it was a good one!
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Thanks! 😉
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Uh oh xD
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