
Sometimes our minds
deceive us,
thoughts oft spilling over
as introspection takes flight.
Our minds tend to steal
our boxes,
those fancy ones filled
with practical reasoning.
Our minds can be
negligent and hurried,
blundering through the day,
then seizing up at night.
Our minds are uniquely etched
with thoughts and desires,
each personal contemplation
deliciously our own.
Our minds can get lost
in the depths of depravity
or swing gracefully to the side
of decency and honor.
Our minds are full of reflections,
ideas, and wonder,
serving as a haven
for the things we must hide.
Our minds can be enigmatic
or effortlessly understandable,
typically only ever failing us
if we give away our control.
And sometimes, we obsess
and overthink because we’re human,
forgetting that our minds
have a mind of their own.
© 2022 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/water-beauty-model-reflection-4658769/
Excellent piece and I’m guilty of pretty much every line. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol… thanks. 😁
I think if there were a survey on this, most people would admit to being overthinkers.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Those closest to me would say I take it to another level, LOL!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol… that generally means you care and so you must care A LOT. Lol…. Overthinkers just want everything to be right in the world, so we think about things until we’re convinced that they are. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Emotional
LikeLiked by 1 person
How did I miss this incredible piece dearest Michelle.
Such great truths shared and love this last line!!
💖💖”forgetting that our minds
have a mind of their own.”
LikeLike
Thank you, Cindy. 🙂
LikeLike
Thank you for sharing my poem. 🙂
LikeLike
Hi. I was worried as I shared it before asking your permission. It rings so deep for me I just had to share it. Apologies for not asking first and thank you for allowing me to share it.
LikeLike
Wow!! Just an excellent explanation. I’m an over thinker and it really messes with you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
So glad you liked it. 😃
LikeLike
Loved your words 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Hannah ❤️
LikeLike
Very well written.👏
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 🙂
LikeLike
Beautiful poem!
LikeLike
Thank you… 🙂
LikeLike
Absolutely love this!! Speaks to my inner ♓️ great words and post ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you… so glad it resonated with you. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes to overthinking
LikeLiked by 1 person
😃
LikeLike
Yes … our minds seem to have a mind of their own Michelle, and then at other times, I wonder where my mind has disappeared to … 🤗🌏💛
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hmmm… that’s another thing I should contemplate. The disappearance of the mind… 🧐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha .. that might be a hard task Michelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Only if my mind disappears. 😜🤪😅
LikeLiked by 1 person
Do our minds have a mind of their own? I loved this poem Michelle and will now be pondering this question all day, I imagine a stack of Russian doll minds all emerging as it is looked at and taken apart. Exactly the sort of puzzle I love 💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Kate. People often question their own thoughts, and so that’s when it dawned on me that sometimes our mind seems to take over, thinking whatever it wants. Lol…
LikeLiked by 1 person
So true. I sometimes watch what I’m thinking in amazement and wonder who is this person having these thoughts …it’s a creative little beast that’s for sure
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such a lovely poem with a stunning image that heightens the brilliance of the poem. I enjoyed the read.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Benjamin. It took me awhile to find the perfect one. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
It has been worth the search. Great job with this poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks again… ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very true. Our minds do indeed have a mind of their own sometimes.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I really think they do. 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes!
LikeLiked by 1 person
A lovely contemplation on mind. Excellent write, Michelle.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Jeff 😌
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome, Michelle. Always. ☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
You have certainly captured the agility of the mind here.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Roberta. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wise 👌🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you… 😊
LikeLike
Beautiful work M!
I hope you are doing well.
Best wishes to you
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Devang. I’m doing well and I hope that you are too. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well done! 👏🏻👏🏻
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you… 🌻
LikeLike
I had to chuckle over the ending. So true.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me too… 😁
LikeLiked by 1 person