
Life,
it moves us along
at record speed.
I try to dangle
delicately,
occasionally letting
my feet scrape
against the ground.
And as I swing under
my beloved canopy,
I notice the poor old oak
has seen better days.
Brittle bark scatters
like tarnished snowflakes,
and the bough dips
against the weight
of my sways.
But do I stop?
No, I continue on
in careless destruction,
marring my protector
all while biding my time.
I’m still a child; after all,
I do not recognize
my mistakes;
will I ever?
© 2022 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/woman-swing-playground-trees-6722023/
And why should I grow up.
I am a child
Like the old oak tree.
It may look old.
But it has got a young sapling within
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So true!
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Such a good question at the end.
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Thank you… 💫
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Wonderfully penned! The dilemma of life😄👏🏼✨
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Thank you… indeed! 🙂
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What beautiful imagery and an amazing clear message! Your thoughts are just so amazingly strung into words! It’s brilliant!
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Thank you, Garima. Your comment made my day. 😊
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Beautifully work! 🌷The last stanza is enlightening! There’s a child inside of each one of us💗🌻
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Thank you… there really is 😊
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Michelle, is this a new version of “The Giving Tree?” Nicely done. Keith
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Lol… yes!!! After all, Shel Silverstein is my favorite poet. 😁🌳
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Beautiful poem!!
Kudos
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Thank you… 😊
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So beautifully written
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Thank you… 💖
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Love this Michelle. Your words and imagery is brilliant!
So well done my friend!💕
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Thank you, Cindy. Hope you’re having a good weekend. ❤️
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Beautiful imagery. I’m in my 40s and still feel like a child.
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Thank you, Bridgette. 🌼May you never lose your childlike wonder. 😉💫
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“Brittle bark scatters
like tarnished snowflakes,” Amazing write, Michelle. ❤️
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Thank you, Jeff… you’re one of those who always notices and appreciates the little things. I like that about you. 🙂
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I suppose one day we’ll be like the old oaks, but as long as they’re still standing, that’s the main thing.
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Most of them will outlive us all. 🌳
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Yes, they sure will.
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