
I often wish…
Thunderstorms could be kinder
Perhaps they come
To serve as a reminder
I often wish…
Rainbows could stay all day
But maybe they disappear
Because of all the gray
I often wish…
The moon could be less blue
Perhaps it’s just reflecting
The moods of me n you
I often wish…
The rain could be less wet
But maybe in all the pouring
Our own tears we forget
I often wish…
We could have less gloomy days
Perhaps all the darkness
Helps us appreciate the rays
I often wish…
I could reach up and pick a star
But maybe that would ruin
The wonder of all they are
I often wish…
Snowstorms could stay away
Perhaps they come to remind us
Of times we need to play
I often wish…
The sun could stay and never set
But maybe the reason
Is for the glory we can’t forget
I often wish…
This world could just see
That the beauty all around us
Is a reminder of what could be
© 2021 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/fantasy-landscape-mountains-fields-220092/
I so wish too!!!!
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💕💫❤️
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❤️🌟🌈
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Very nice work.
I am reading and my thoughts started flying in the sky
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Thank you… 😃💫
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Michelle, I love the style you chose to accentuate your wishes. Nicely done. Keith
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Thank you Keith, I tried to make a distinct pattern with this one. Repeating different words in each stanza was tricky and I kept wanting to deviate. Lol… I create a lot of different repeating patterns in some of my writing. Some more obvious than others. I just find it more fun to challenge myself and come up with new ones every time.
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Michelle, I fully understand. I was taught lists should have consistent framing, so I found myself rewriting words to fit together. You did well. Keith
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Thank you Keith. 😃
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Your finale stanza is the best wish of all…
“I often wish…
This world could just see
That the beauty all around us
Is a reminder of what could be”
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It’s a wish I’ll never stop wishing. 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for sharing this Chuck. 🙂
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I always love to read and share your posts with followers, Dear M!!
xoxox 😊😘💕🎁🌹✨
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And it’s one of the kindest things you could do for me Chuck. Thanks again. ❤️
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Ahhh, So happy to hear that, Dear M!! Makes me happy to know!! It is always a pleasure to read and share great writing – Yours!
xoxox 😘💕🎁😊🌹✨
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A beautiful poem Michelle and a wonderful reminder
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Thanks so much Sadje ❤️
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You’re welcome 😉
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This is beautiful! 💚
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Thank you ❤️
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You’re welcome ❤️
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