
She spreads her billowy petticoat
Just wishing for some fun
As her dainty white tufts
Reach for the midday sun
Soft and serene
Her cottony clusters finally do fly
Each ruffle floating along
Towards the infinite wide open sky
Her lacy remnants twirl
On the delicate breezy air
Her dizzying pirouettes
Cause the bees to stop and stare
What is it about her
That makes the world stand still
A graceful little weed
Who can give us such a thrill
© 2017 Michelle Cook
Writing prompt: What is it about a dandelion?
Wind Kisses… they are…
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Oh yes! ❤️
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Very beautiful poem about one my bunnies favorite things
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Thank you… 🙂
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I LOVE THIS!
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Awww thank you, Rene ❤️
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You’re most welcome!
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Michelle this is a beautiful story of a weed and an even sweeter story that your saw her in a different way
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Thank you, Kate. Nature always inspires me in the best of ways. 🙂
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Fun verse Michelle.
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Thanks, Brad 🙂
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Gorgeous ❤️
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Thank you, CC ❤️
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My pleasure always ❤️😘
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A lovely poem with a wonderful story. The simplest of weeds exhibiting the perfection of nature. Thank for taking the time to observe, and write this about this perfection.🌹💐
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Thank you Mr. M. Nature has always been one of my favorite subjects to write about. 🌻
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Delightful, Michelle. I have to agree. Hugs.
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Aww… Thanks Teagan. Hugs back. 🙂
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this is so incredible – inspirational lines!!
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So glad you like it… This is truly one of my favorites I’ve written as well. There is just something about a dandelion and I really wanted to capture her in words. 😉
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I love this
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Thanks so much! 💛
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Lovely!
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❤️
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Beautiful. Like looking at the wonders of nature through the eyes of a child ❤
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Thank you Liana… this one took me quite awhile to write, and it ended up being one of my favorites. 🙂
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Billowy petticoat …delicious
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Lol… Thanks Michael! I toned it down a little. 😉
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Beautiful. 👏❤
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Thank you… and I wanted to let you know that I cannot seem to get to your site. Keeps saying it’s been deleted. 🙁
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Try now.
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Nope… still can’t
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Hopefully now it will work. Fingers crossed
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No, still says it’s deleted.
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Oh I will try and sort it. Sorry about this.
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I hope you can fix it…. so sorry you’re having trouble.
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Thank you.
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Try secretgarden19.wordpress.com
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https://httpadnama72.wordpress.com
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Try this
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Try this
https://httpadnama72.wordpress.com
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If I go to Secretgarden19.wordpress.com in the browser, I can get to you. But if I try to click on this link to your page here in the comments, it says your blog is deleted.
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I am doing my best to sort this.
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I’ve had a few problems and thought they had all been sorted.
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Much gentle beauty to this one..
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Aww…. thanks grumpy. 😉💛
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Gorgeous, I suppose it’s mother earth’s way of caressing our senses and trying to tell us humans to be kind and gentle towards her…..
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Thank you… perhaps it is. 🌻
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Beautiful and elegantly written my dear.
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Thank you ❤️
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