Fizzy Whizzys’
Were her absolute fave
Made her want
To misbehave
Effervescent
Drops of delight
This euphoric treat
Was out of sight!
Never enough
She craved them daily
Gobbling each piece down
Rather gayly
Then one day
Her sweets were discontinued
And the search for more
She still continues
© 2018 Michelle Cook
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Oh how true this definitely describes you. 😆
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Lol… 😉
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A delight to read. Have a great weekend
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Thanks! You too!
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Oh dear! I’m being watched!😨😨
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Lol… 😉
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An excellent metaphorical poem
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Thank you Derrick 😉
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Hahaha so cute words of poetry, Michelle
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Thank you 😉
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Welcome
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“Then one day
Her sweets were discontinued” I totally know that pain. There are times I get worried about becoming too attached to a certain shampoo or body wash, because, most likely than not, it will get discontinued.
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Lol…. Oh yes, I hate it when that happens! That’s why I buy 10 of everything when I go shopping. 😉 Lol
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Good to know it isn’t just me. 😆
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Lol… When I die, people will go through my cabinets, shake their heads, and just wonder why… 😉
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Hahaha! 😆
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oh yum!! I love fruit gummies, or whatever you call them LOL This was a fun one 🙂
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They actually sell a candy called Fizzy whizzies, but I couldn’t find a picture for them. Lol…
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