
We slept naked,
molten bodies like lava;
we collided.
You felt intense
but loving,
the perfect mixture
of naughty n nice.
I felt like you wanted
to cherish me,
then rape me;
love me,
but leave me hanging
by a lifeless thread.
And we were endless,
both lost in the dark,
floating away in an abyss
of nothing and everything.
Mixing like watercolors
with no describable color,
we lost ourselves
to our lusty love.
Our anchor out of reach,
we kept each other
from whirling away
into oblivion.
Holding steady in the still,
waiting for the light
to at last consume us.
Straying too far
from where we’d begun,
then saved at last
by the never-failing strands
of time.
We soon collapsed
side by side,
nestled in the downy bed
of our imperfections.
© 2022 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/couple-lovers-kiss-passion-love-5566210/
Hi Michele,
I was one of those people that caught the word and think i thought.. i have to come back and re-read this to make sure ai captured it right.
it was a primal read that hit the depth of my senses. Loved the intensity and romantic passion ignited ❤️💗❤️
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I’m so glad you loved it. Fiery, intense passion is often my favorite subject. 🔥😍
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Absolutely fantabulously fiery
1💗
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❤️
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Picture portrait in the poems is with the flow and powerful expression.
Word like
Lifeless thread
Nothing and everything
No describable color
Ends with
Nested and in bed with our imperfection
Beautiful emotions
God bless
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Thank you… I do love expressive writing. ❤️
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Why in the third para. It is needed to use the word “Rape”. Not able to accept could you share.
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I was was wondering who would ask that. Lol… It just expresses the intensity of the moment. Some might feel emotionally upset by the use of the word, but some sexual experiences can be this way and I wanted to capture that.
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I could relate very vividly in my relationship with my past. Where some moment of time I felt like I was raped and in other was doing the same .
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Beautiful and imaginary
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Thank you…
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Have you written more poem like these?
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I write a poem every day. They vary in type, but yes there are many more like this. Some can be found in my book, Beneath the Canopy.
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Wow, I am chatting with the person who has written a full book of poems.
One poem a day this must be creatively encouraging daily,
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Lol, yes writing is my passion. I’ve also written about 5 years worth of writing prompts on my other blog if you’re ever in need of inspiration. Here’s the link. I’ve taken a break since spring, but there are plenty to be found in the archives.
https://puttingmyfeetinthedirt.com/category/writing-prompts/
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Thanks for sharing I will read it.
I am also involved in a lot of practices to get myself inspired but it lasts for some time only.
Now experience in my 40 s
Relationship
Sharing
Love
Is everything rest is all time pass just filled with EGO, compression and constant race of some type
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Well, just keep doing what you love to do. That’s what makes life fun.
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I am a scientist and university teacher by profession but always liked Art and culture from my heart. But fail to write any poetic lines. Sometime I see myself not belong to this profession at all
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Oh that’s awesome… I used to work with scientists everyday when I worked in biotechnology. I didn’t start writing on a regular basis until about 8 years ago. I took a poetry class here on WordPress and loved it so much that I decided to keep doing it.
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I also trained in biotechnology myself and now doing working on bioinformatics. AI and Machines learning stuff. Just for the job no inspiration .
Interesting, Tell me about this poetry class. Is it online possible .
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That’s cool you’re doing all that. I’d love to get back into the science field again. I really miss it. Here’s the link to all the classes that WordPress offers. https://wordpress.com/dailypost/blogging-university/
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Beautiful and intimate.
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Thank you… 🙂
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Sounds like chaotic bliss. Great poem!
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Thank you… 🙂
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“The downy bed of our imperfections” – love it!
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Thank you… 🙂
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