
And then suddenly you were gone
like the rustling of crumpled leaves
fading against the backdrop
of a saturated city
My sails became limp and lifeless
hanging threadbare
against Times Square temptations
leaving me with a melancholy mindset
in the midst of a cosmopolitan dream
Manhattan meanderings
simultaneously stifled
an adventure left orphaned
under clouds full of finality
A meteor shower of emotions
enhancing the dimly lit depression
causing a crater of convictions
to overflow and seep into the crevices
flooding my ever-dispirited heart
© 2023 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/illustrations/ai-generated-woman-rain-night-wet-8020990/
Love the wistful tenderness of regret here! 🙂 Powerful verses, Michelle ❤
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Thank you so much, Tom. ❤️
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Painful, powerful, beautiful, Michelle. ❤️
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Thank you, Jeff ❤️😊
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‘enhancing the dimly lit depression’ this imagery is fabulous. Love the alliteration sprinkled through this whole piece Michelle 💜
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Thank you, Bree. I had so much fun with this one. 💫😊
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Beautiful lines! when our loved one is gone from life the feelings are like that.
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Thank you, Priti. ❤️
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I’m glad your doing great 😊 .. just enjoy life
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Thank you…. Yes, always! ❤️
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Your Welcome my their friend ❤️❤️
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Beautiful!
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Thank you… ❤️
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This is beautifully done!
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Thank you… ❤️
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I felt that. ❤
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Oh Debbi…. I feel for you. Hugs… ❤️xo
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Powerful imagery in your words Michelle!
Well done!💕
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Thank you, Cindy ❤️
This was a fun one to write. ☺️
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You’re so welcome Michele. I could tell! ❤️
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Nyx. Hugs… 🤗
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Well-chosen words, Michelle. The image gets through very well.
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Thank you…. Was hoping for that. 🙂
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New York blues Michelle
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You got it. 😉 Hope you’re having a good weekend Ivor. 🙂💫
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I’m afraid it’s a cold rainy Sunday … but I’m going ok 🤗🌏😍
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Awww…. Well, I’m glad you’re doing ok. 😊
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