
I think we all reach a point
A place of exhaustion
A time of misunderstanding
A feeling of not being heard
The scrapping of knees on concrete
Life becomes too much to bear
So we alter our direction
Scrambling for the door
The one we hope leads to peace
I think I’m at that point
And I’m not looking back
I need to find some place
That takes me far away
Miles from this point of discontent
This place of unworthiness
This time of hurting
This feeling of hopelessness
I can’t keep bleeding
for the rest of my life
At some point
it all has to end
© 2024 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/illustrations/ai-generated-girl-space-flowers-8210734/
wonderful poem, Michelle… there is a place where we are not alone but sometimes it can feel that way. Sending love❤️🤗🙏🏼
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Thank you, Cindy. ❤️ Always appreciate your kind words.
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You’re always welcome, Michelle❣️
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Ow wow this is lovely
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Thank you… ❤️
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Beautiful poem Michelle Cook. Nice stuff my friend. The point of no return, very fascinating🙌
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Thank you, Mthobisi 😊
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You are welcome Madam🙏
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I accidentally deleted so here I go again. It doesn’t matter if the words are true or not, What matters is that they resonate. Poetry can say so much with so little.
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So true… thank you 😊
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Well, whether it’s fact or fiction, I do think it’s a beautifully expressed poem, Michelle.
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Thank you ❤️
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Feeling this truth, beautiful!
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Awww thank you… 😊
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It seems that no one knows what to say. Maybe we are all wondering if your poem is truth or fiction.
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And that’s the one thing about poetry, nobody ever knows the poet’s true meaning behind those written words. 🙂
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Exhaustion can feel good and rewarding, and it can feel bad and wrong. The picture is beautiful.
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Very true… perspective is everything.
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At the crossroads, and pondering what is the best path to follow … 🌏😉
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Such a great song. Thank you, Ivor. ❤️
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My pleasure Michelle 🎶😊
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I hope you find the peace you need in a quiet place of serenity close by, nestled near your heartbeat. Soon. I’ve felt the frustration and pain you so beautiful expressed, it resonates. I’m on the other side of the door at the moment, hopefully I can stay here
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Thank you, Kate ❤️ And I’m so glad you’re on the other side of all that at the moment. We come n go back n forth but I guess in the long run that’s what makes us appreciate things more.
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Perspective and distance for sure. In the middle of the hard places it is just one foot after another – keep going, sending you love ❤️ and yes there are always ups and downs – like a cardiogram – I guess that’s how we know we’re alive
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Thank you… I feel the love ❤️
Today’s been a wonderful day. Focusing on all the things I love most. Your comments always make me smile. 😊
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Oh yes, Michelle! I am in agreement with you! A wonderful poignant poem! Well done, well said!
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Thank you, Carol anne ❤️
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