
Yes, I can love like the wind
on a bright, breezy day,
and the smile in my heart
will take your breath away.
I’m full of hot lava,
hurricanes, and deep seas,
and when I bestow a kiss,
I bring my lover to their knees.
I’m like a serene tropical island
in the midst of summer storm,
and those who have loved me
have often felt reborn.
So yes, I can love,
probably even better than the rest,
but there’s no telling for certain
unless you put me to the test.
© 2022 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/wheat-field-shoes-legs-meadow-6392428/
Beautifully expressed…..
Love this a lot, Keep sharing Michelle, thanks
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Awww… I’m so glad you loved it. 💛
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Clever.
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Thank you 🙂
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Such a beautiful poem Michele!
Wow to their knees!!!! You’ve got the touch my friend and love this:
“I’m like a serene tropical island
in the midst of summer storm,
and those who have loved me
have often felt reborn.”
❤️😍
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Lol… Oh Cindy… thank you. ☺️❤️😉
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😂you’re so welcome!❤️
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Wow, Michelle!!!! I so loved this poem!! Especially the last stanza – and the last line! Mmmm! You sure put a lot of silent wondering in a lot of heads! Cheeky? And what, My Dear is wrong with cheeky? Bellissimo, Michelle, Bellissimo!!!
😁😍💖💕🌹
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Lol… thank you so much, Chuck. You made me smile. ☺️ I think I just worry too much. 😅
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Don’t Miss This From Michelle!!! ✨✨👍
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Thank you, Chuck 💛
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My pleasure!!! 😊💕🌹
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Michelle, terrifically crafted. I love the companion picture which provides and image of a young woman waiting in the fields for her lover to arrive. Well done. Keith
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Thank you, Keith. It took me forever to find the right photo for this. And when I found this one, I knew it was the perfect fit for this poem. 😁
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Oh, this write makes me smile deeply. The flow is so wonderful and the message, well, it’s powerful and awesome. I love this, Michelle. 💛
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I’m glad you loved it, Jeff. Thank you… 💫☺️💛
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You’re most welcome, Michelle. Always my pleasure. 🌻✨💛
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This is lovely, the imagery is incredible.
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Thank you… ❤️nature always inspires me in so many ways. I started off with the first stanza and let it kinda sit for a few days while I mulled over what else I could add. The rest came from little snippets of things people had said to me over the years. So it was fun to write and reminisce at the same time.
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You’re very welcome ❤ it’s just so lovely
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☺️💫🌻 💛😊
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Nice imagery, and a good message.
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Thank you… this was a fun one to write. I always love incorporating nature and life lessons into my poems. I struggled with this one because it feels a bit cheeky to me. But in the end I decided that this is how it is when you love with your whole heart, and that’s what I try to do. 💛
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That’s right! It’s what we do.
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