
There’s a lonely place
where you exist
I try to forget you
yet the memories persist
You were once my strength
you anchored my soul
but after everything you said
it all finally took its toll
I remember sinking to my knees
in painful defeat
my perfect image of you
at last shattered complete
I wanted to hold onto the good
but the good wouldn’t stay
and looking back
I’m relieved you went away
© 2024 Michelle Cook
Photo credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/tree-field-moon-night-sky-meadow-736884/
sad poem Michelle! ❤
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Endearing…
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Thank you… ☺️ The heart doesn’t easily forget the things that are deeply embedded within.
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Welcome 🤗
True that. The heart is a sensitive thing. We can learn from our experiences, tweak ourselves a bit, grow and move on…hopefully…😁
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Yes, and we can be happy for all the moments that were quite blissful along the way. 😊
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I so feel this.
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It’s often this way ❤️ Hugs…
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Thank you.Yes, it is. Hugs to you as well.❤️
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Thanks 😊
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❤️
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Describe this feeling perfectly. Beautifully said. I am in the middle of finalizing a divorce and I feel this completely.
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Thank you… I hope through everything that you’ll find your peace at the end of it all. ❤️
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Wow. Such a brilliant and touching poem Michelle. Indeed the last stanza really sets me on a high note. “The good came but it couldn’t stay and looking back I am relieved you went away”🔥🔥🔥
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Thank you for your kind words, Mthobisi. We have to take the good along with the bad in life always learning and growing as we go. ❤️
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Thank you… 😊
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hard to embrace, yet necessary sometimes. love that final line❣️
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Thank you, Cindy. I believe everything happens for a reason. 😉
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You’re so very welcome. I soooo agree with you❣️
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It’s a hard place to be, this feeling of defeat and at the same time relief. You express it so well, Michelle.
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Thank you… sometimes I just wish I could forget the parts of my life that have deeply hurt me. But then again, if I forgot all the bad stuff, I wouldn’t realize how blessed I am for the life I have now.
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👍 So true. We shouldn’t forget our “deliverances” — they teach us so much about the things that really matter, how never to lose hope even in the darkest places.
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I love how you put that… So lovely, so poetic. ❤️
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You can thank yourself first for inspiring me. 😀💞
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😊
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Really loved this, Michelle!!! Your first stanza captured it all for me! So accurately and eloquently penned, My Dear!! Bellissimo! 😁💕🌹
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Aww… I’m so glad it did! Wonderful to see you Chuck. 🙂
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So happy to have your words reaching out to my heart!!! 😊💕🌹
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😊
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Very poignant verse!
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Beautiful, Michelle!! And I love the accompany photo!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome 💕
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